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Todd McKeever's avatar

The data exposes something most writers won’t admit: they’re optimizing for what feels bold and what looks minimal. Short titles feel punchy. No question mark feels confident. But the data says those instincts are backwards.

What’s actually happening is a trust gap. First-person titles, negative framing, longer specificity, they all do the same thing: they make a promise the reader can verify. “On Burnout” asks the reader to take a leap of faith. “What I Wish Someone Told Me Before I Burned Out” gives them something to grab before they decide to click.

35 years of communication taught me this: people don’t engage with ideas. They engage with people who seem to have lived them. The “I” in the title isn’t ego – it’s evidence. And evidence earns the open.

Good stuff.

Thibaut Buewaert's avatar

I agree with you, Todd!

Jackie Pias Carlin's avatar

I thank you for the data. They're priceless to newbies like me.

Adam Steinmetz's avatar

Unlike most of these how I built a Substack with more subscribers than the population of Tokyo while you drank your morning coffee, this post was really helpful. Love the data driven approach!

Antrell Rainey's avatar

I enjoyed reading this your provided us with a lot of key information. Thanks for your time and effort and creating this report. Time to edit lol

Monica Lundstedt's avatar

Super complete and very useful just in time! I was just touching this point and anañyzing my titles, subtitles and long vs short posts just yesterday! ☺️

Joshua Irving Gershick's avatar

I've worked in journalism, in print and online, for decades, and some of these findings subvert old rules, practices and taboos about headline length et al. I love it. Thanks for this new perspective!

Maury Hill's avatar

Amazing analytics! I will definitely use these suggestions. Except MAYBE using no capital letters in the title. I'm an English teacher and it would actually kill a little piece of my soul to skip capitalizing even the first word of the title. 😂 Question: What's the suggested practice for using all caps like I did above for emphasis?

Larry J. Walsh's avatar

Fantastic info! Many thanks!

Radha's avatar

This is awesome thank you!! I adopted Substack early and started returning to my passion for writing as I went through cancer. I started Chemo Yogi and am now trying to build want started as a personal journal into a business that will support women going through breast cancer. I guess the question would be ways/ success stories of how to best with authenticity grow something personal into something that is more public and accessible to the masses?

Let's Talk Football's avatar

Always looking out for help

Kate McCready's avatar

Did you notice with first person titles, if it mattered if the I/my was up the front of the title? Or could it be in the middle.

Eg. My number one lesson from being made redundant vs. Redundancy sucks, but here's the biggest lesson I learned.

Jiri "Skzites" Fiala's avatar

Wow, this sounds fascinating! 🚀 Analyzing that many posts must have revealed some real gems. Can’t wait to see what insights you’ve uncovered about growing a publication. Always keen to learn

Thibaut Buewaert's avatar

Much appreciated! It’s easy to overlook those specific metrics, but they truly are the hidden levers that make all the difference in the long run. Thanks for that!

Yasmin Chopin's avatar

Thanks for a really useful set of data. I’ve wondered about title length and it is helpful to know a longer title should work well. I will be implementing some of these ideas immediately!

Larry Payne's avatar

Thanks for this invaluable data. I’ve worked writing headlines for others, but this goes far beyond any of the guest work.

Jess, The Creator's avatar

thank you guys!! this article is awesome and very helpful!!!